Thursday 17 November 2016

Poet James Nash at Quarry Mount Primary School

Beowulf, Blood and Brutality at Quarry Mount by Sally Bavage

“Good afternoon, everyone”  said James Nash, the local poet commissioned by Headingley LitFest to work at Quarry Mount primary school with Ms Aspin's year 5 class.
“Good afternoon Mr Nash” chorused the whole class immediately – a clear sign of just how polite they are and how seriously they took the occasion.

James had taken the tale of Beowulf from a very old tome he uses as a stimulus and used it with these nine-year-olds to get them to listen to poetry, take in the story and write some lines of their own that reflected what they had absorbed of the ancient saga.  A heck of a lot! 

Class 5 teacher Rachel Aspin with James Nash
The young readers used a music stand as a lectern and the rhythms of their language played out over the audience listening with rapt attention.  Beowulf the hero and Grendel the monster do various kinds of bloodstained battle, with a wide range of appropriate language that took the story back to the first millennium rather than echo the X-box vocabulary more normal today.  We had carnage, revenge, gruesome encounters and old-fashioned victory despite the odds. Beowulf “ripped his arm off like a piece of paper” rather stays in the mind.  How good to acquire the art of reading with  confidence, animation and verve in public at this young age – something a good few adults could do with brushing up!

One young lady used the rhetorical question form very deftly to pose and then answer questions about Beowulf's progress.  It was heartening to see how the youngsters had learned to read out clearly and deliver bravura performances despite earlier nerves.

Maryam reads out her Beowulf tale
As Kay Hendley, headteacher, said: “The poems were crafted carefully, read out with confidence and shared with the audience with great enthusiasm.  It was an absolute pleasure to be with these young writers.  Children here have fewer opportunities than some for this kind of experience of literature so this is a marvellous chance for them.”







Ms Gough, teaching assistant with year 5, added: “Quite a few of the children did not really know what poetry was or how to write a poem before James came.  They have worked so hard on their own writing and they have obviously really enjoyed it.”

“A great event allowing the children an opportunity to experiene poetry as an art form.  Working with these children I know how challenging it was for them to speak in front of an audience” -

Ruth Curtis, school staff. 


Class teacher Rachel Aspin: “The youngsters were so looking forward to performing their work; it has definitely changed the behaviour of some of them.  One young boy, normally very reluctant, sat down so diligently to write it was wonderful to see.  And the confidence of the whole group has just soared.”

Best thing about this project?  Working with James and Rachel.  Learning how to write a poem. Learning how to be brave when reading out a poem.

What have you learned with James?  To make poem lines shorter. Poems don't have to rhyme.  Practice makes perfect.  Editing and redrafting. 

Why is it good to share your work?  So you can get over the fear.  And so others might want to make their poems.  So you can maybe inspire your friend or parents.


What will you remember about this project?  Every single thing!

Final word to Alisha, when asked to sum up in one sentence what the class had got from the exposure to reading and writing poetry: “Inspiration and happiness.”


Tales of Beowulf are to be scanned for the school website then put on display.  A lovely legacy for the future readers of Quarry Mount.  Thanks once again to the Inner North West area management committee for granting us the funding for this project.  Thanks, too, to Rachel Harkess of Headingley LitFest who helped out with the workshops.

Poet James Nash at Spring Bank Primary School

Into the Dragon's Den by Sally Bavage
No, not budding entrepreneurs but real poets from Ms Ward's year 2 class.  Once again, local councillors have funded the LitFest's programme of poetry workshops with local schools and we were able to commission published poet James Nash to work with the youngsters on the theme of Dragons.

Head Mr Brawley,James Nash, Class 2 teacher Jo Ward
Twenty-eight youngsters read snatches of original poems  to an admiring school audience and a couple of rows of parents/carers.   They all read a snippet of their writing, using the microphone mostly for the first time and persisting in the face of nerves.  A couple of them even adjusted the height of the mike to suit themselves, like pros.  At six!

The excerpts included some beautiful imagery, some comedy and some heart-felt emotions. A small selection:

“Teeth as sharp as a sword blade”
“Ears as pointed as ice cream cones”
“Tail as long as a snake”
“Breath that smells like a burning bonfire”
“My fire smells like apples”
“I breathe in the chilly autumn air and breathe it out as flames”
I breathe burning stars”
and
“I have a dark side” - a line delivered, to laughs, with all the comic timing of a pro.  At six!

One youngster, a September refugee from Syria who speaks very little English at the moment, took his turn with the class and persisted until he delivered his lines correctly.  Another young chap has severe learning problems and rarely speaks.  Not today; he joined his classmates to perform with the microphone.  A case of Magic Dragon indeed!  (If you can remember Puff – which, as it was released in 1963 I probably shouldn't confess to remembering this).

As Mr Brawley, headteacher, said: “This shows the power of poetry to inspire children to use more sophisticated language and to inspire others in the audience.”  The children “so looked forward to the poet's visits and their confidence has simply soared.  James has drawn out vocabulary that is amazing,” said class assistant Krissy.  Jo Ward, the class 2 teacher, was so pleased that “the quality of vocabulary was stunning, they all want to write new poems now and their writing has shown how much more confident they are.”

Perhaps the last words should go to the children themselves:
Best thing about this project was “working with a real poet” and “making a poem of your own.”
I have learned “how to write better” and “making poems is fun.”
It is good to share your work with other children in the school because “if you were really proud of it, but a bit shy to show everyone, then performing your work means everyone can be proud with you.”
Best memory?  “The happiness of making poems.”

And the happiness will live on as the poems are to be put in a book for the school library so others can read them. Thanks again to Rachel Harkess from Headingley LitFest who went in to help with the poetry workshops


Feedback from Parents

Wonderful poems and some fantastic reading

I enjoyed listening to all the children's poems.  They were all really creative.  I think it is som important for children to enjoy literacy and believe it builds confidence.

The whole school has got so much out of this assembly.  The pride the year 2 class had in their work was gorgeous to see.  Very proud moment.

Wonderful event – absolutely fantastic. Brilliantly hosted and presented by James and spring Bank.  Well done to the teachers too – Mrs Ward!  Simply brilliant.

It was great to see the children read their favourite bits of their poems.  They were really inspired by James Nash!

Excellent poetry reading.  Great for the kids to have the chance to speak in public, a great skill to hae.  Fabulous poetry as well!

Great to hear the children doing some amazing poetry with the poet James Nash.

Really enjoyed performance – impressed with poems and confidence children showed in performing.

Fantastic presentation of lovely poetry.  Thank you!

A wonderful assembly!  Heidi brought home the poem 'Firework the Friendly Dragon' which the whole family enjoyed.  Thank you to James Nash – a wonderful poet.  A brilliant event – more please!!!

Really wonderful event – the kids seemed to get involved.

Wonderful idea!  Great to introduce poetry to kids.  Loved it!

Really enjoyed the event.  Was so lovely to hear year 2 enjoying poetry.

Lovely to hear the children express themselves, use a microphone and perform!!  I hope you have many more such events.

Max has really enjoyed working with James in class to write the poems.  Great to be invited to assembly to hear the poems and see/hear how hard they've been working.  THANK YOU!
PS.  Brilliant delivery in assembly.  Thank you James – wonderful!

It's great to see the enthusiasm of all the kids towards poetry and words.  Always a treat to come into school and see the kids speak with such confidence.


Funded by your local ward councillors of the Inner North West Community Committee

Thursday 10 November 2016

Poet James Nash visits Weetwood Primary School

Individual Achievement was the theme for this series of poetry workshops led by local published poet James Nash, ably supported by Headingley LitFest associate Rachel Harkess and working with class 5.  And achieve they did!  James used a child's rather battered-looking head, carrying stains and scratches.  What could have happened to the youngster?

 "The children were really engaged in the project and their enthusiasm was brilliant" (Class Teacher)

              Anna Ellison (Year 5 teacher) with James Nash
As class teacher Anna Ellison said, “James and Rachel's relationships with the children was brilliant.  They were able to support the children, whatever their ability.  And the children were so engaged in the project.  They have learnt more about editing and improving their work – how to take the first draft and craft it with more descriptive language, using their own ideas.  Enthusiastic?  Absolutely!  We love this work with James and Rachel.  Please can we do it again?”

“Poems don't have to rhyme!”
“You get good feedback about your ideas.”
“I loved writing the poem and talking about it.”
“You can use emotions and describe feelings in poems.”
“ You can put a question and then answer it in a poem.”
“It was good to listen to different writing.”
“You can write about so many things.”
“How fun it is to work with James.”
“You can learn from your work and others can learn too.”

And perhaps two comments sum up what was the general feeling:
“What I like about this is that it gives me inspiration to write more stories and stuff.”
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“I enjoyed EVERYTHING!!”

Funded by your local ward councillors of the Inner North West Community Committee