The children in year 5 at Weetwood School wrote poems
inspired by the book they have been reading in class. The book, ‘Kensuke’s
Kingdom’ by Michael Morpurgo tells the story of a young boy who is marooned on
an island in the South Pacific along with his dog, Stella Artois, and judging
by the poems it inspired it is well worth reading.
The children read confidently, and clearly immersed
themselves not only in the process of writing and performing poetry but also in
the whole idea of being abandoned and alone.
Some memorable lines were
Seagulls screech like a knife
I see a kind of nothing
Still I remember the taste of the brine
I can taste the salty sand
I wake up confused, feel heat from blazing sun
Rocks dangerous and steep
I am excited it’s new
I smell the fresh air
The footprint not mine
My body is not working
Hidden streams, juicy cherries
Sand clutching my hand
I want to go home
Someone waiting for me, heartbroken
Gail Alvarez adds:
The pupils from Mr Annis-Brown's class were really so very confident they took your breath away. You could hear every word, even from the back of the packed hall. The teacher was really pleased at the response to James Nash's coaching to perform, and the collaboration was heartwarming: one youngster got so nervous they dried up but the boy next in line just took the poem and read it out. Marvellous.
Audience Comments
A large thanks to
James and Rachel, we've learned so much and gained confidence
speaking to an audience. The poetry was fantastic. (class teacher)
super poems and
snippets of poems. It was clear a lot of hard work has gone on behind
the scenes. A lovely idea to base the poems on the book the children
are reading in class - the children were clearly vey inspired.
Amazing how the
quality of the children's work is boosted so much by the leadership of
an inspiring professional writer who believes in their abilities and
consequently allows them to believe in themselves. Thank you.
My win
granddaughters enjoyed the development and writing of the poems and I
very much enjoyed the performance by the class.
Great event - my
girls really enjoyed the process of creating their poems and working
with the poet
Fantastic event to
spark children's interest in poetry and to share it.
The children really
enjoyed and benefited from the help and input they received. The end
result an reading was fabulous.
Language evolves
both spoken and written. Good to hear youngsters working with poetry.
Really nice to hear
the poems the children had worked hard on.
I am so pleased we
came. How wonderful the children could write such good poems.
Congratulations to all concerned for the excellent work
Next year let's try
and get elders involved again - OWLS now has more capacity so we may
be better placed to get involved. Would be good to hear James Nash
read out a poem so we could hear a real life poet speaking.
Some children’s
comments
The children were
asked what they had learnt, why it was good to share their work with
others and what they would remember about the project.
What they had
learnt
Finding that my
quick jottings can be turned into a good and finished poem.
A small poem can be
a good poem.
Only using the best
parts of your first try will make it the best it can be
How it changed from
each lesson It got better and better!
How to present a
poem
How to write poetry
and how James Nash writes poetry.
Learning how to
write a really good poem
When you wright
(sic) a poem it doesn’t have to rhyme and that when you wright a
poem you have to wright it like whats(sic) happening now.
I have learnt how to
be a proper poet.
Writing poems is fun
and I’m good at it.
How to write poems
professionally.
That nothing is
wrong in poems
Learning how to edit
and write a poem.
Writing different
drafts
That poems take a
lot of crossing outs.
I have learned that
your poems can be anything
To do more
descriptive writing
That poems don’t
always have to rhyme.
That you need to
take time and don’t rush.
Making the story
into a poem.
It doesn’t matter
what the poems(sic) about
Why it is good to
share
Because you can hear
other ways of doing it and get inspiration from them
It is good because
you could give them inspiration
Because it makes you
happy and really good and you can be a super star and wizard.
It builds your
confidence and other people can hear everyone else’s work.
It makes you feel
more confinc(sic).
To maybe give them
more ideas and give them ispration(sic).
Because they will
know what it’s like to write a poem.
Because they can get
inspiration and start writing poems themselves.
I think it is but I
don’t like reading my work in front of other people.
For advise (sic)
To boost your
confidence.
So they can
experience what where (sic) learning
So you’re
confident in reading.
It is good because
they can have ideas for their work.
Because it helps
build up your confidence.
To inspire them to
write poems.
To boost your
confidence. And to show everyone that you are Amazing at writing
poems.
So they can learn
not just in their classrooms
What will you
remember
I will remember
working with a proper poet
I will remember
every think(sic) about this project.
I will remember
meeting a professional poet.
... It was amazing
Everything because
it was brilliant
Everything. James
and Rachel are really nice.
That I wrote a poem
My poem